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Expertise:

Technical Writing

Technical Editing

Proposal Development

Other Specialties:

        Software User Guide Development

            Procedure Manual Development

        Training Materials Development

            Project Management

        Data Gathering

            Survey Development

        Interviewing

            Literature Review

        Internet Research

            Records Research

        Editorial Development

            Publication Management

        Publication Design

            Marketing Plan Development

        Media Outreach

            Industry Outreach

        Market Development

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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PROPOSAL DEVELOPMENT

I have been writing proposals since 1982 and participating on proposal teams in the Architecture & Engineering field since 1994. My experience includes developing proposals for the following:

  • Internet Service Providers

  • Telecommunications Companies

  • IPTV Providers

  • US Army Corps of Engineers (USACE)

  • Air Force Center for Environmental Excellence (AFCEE)

  • Air Force Civil Engineering Support Agency (AFCESA)

  • United States Navy

  • Idaho National Laboratories

  • Foreign Governments: Saudi Arabia, Qatar

  • Transit Authorities: Seattle Monorail Authority, Bay Area Rapid Transit, Portland Light Rail, Port Authority of New York & New Jersey, Caltrans, Oregon Department of Transportation

  • National Park Service

  • California Parks and Recreation Department

  • California Municipalities

  • Colleges and Universities

A key part of developing Department of Defense proposals involves mastering the nuances of Indefinite Delivery/Indefinite Quantity (ID/IQ) Contracts. My ID/IQ experience includes:

  • Indefinite Delivery/Indefinite Quantity - Heavy Engineering and Repair Contract (HERC)

  • Indefinite Delivery/Indefinite Quantity - Performance Environmental Restoration Multiple Award Contract (PERMAC)

  • Indefinite Delivery/Indefinite Quantity - Multiple Award Task Order Contract (MATOC)

  • Indefinite Delivery/Indefinite Quantity - Environmental Remediation Services Contract (ERSC)

  • Indefinite Delivery/Indefinite Quantity - Sustainment/Restoration and Modernization Task Order Contract (SATOC)

I have had the good fortune to develop proposals for a wide range of planning and design project types, including:

International Airport

Park Planning and Design

Bridge

Athletic Field Design

Light and Heavy Rail

Landscape

Tunnel

Streetscape Design

Highway

Architectural Design Guidelines

Mining

Community Master Planning

Demolition

Specific Plans

Nuclear Decontamination and Decommissioning

Land Planning

Unexploded Ordnance

Environmental Restoration

Information Technology (Program Management)

Lead Based Paint and Asbestos Abatement

Cogeneration

Infrastructure Assessment

Wetlands Restoration

Paving

Campus Master Planning

Information Technology Initiatives

 

PROPOSAL HISTORY

My proposal writing career can be said to have started in 1982 when I and a friend made an unsolicited proposal to the Coors Brewing Company of Golden, Colorado in hopes of gaining corporate underwriting for what might be called an “artist and lecture series.” My associate had a long history as an artist and repertoire guy in the music business, and a great rolodex, and we envisioned a series of college events in which notable songwriters, performers, and producers would be interviewed on stage, demonstrate their craft, and take questions from a student audience. This is a format that gained subsequent acceptance through such programs as “Inside the Actor’s Studio” with James Lipton. We weren’t able to sell our idea to Coors, but my proposal writing career was launched.

I moved on to writing case studies for health care fundraising projects, interviewing stakeholders and developing compelling proposals that demonstrated the need for program improvements, detailed alternative funding mechanisms, and weighed public support for proposed schemes. I also became active in developing proposal packages for publishing projects.

In 1994 I took my first full-time proposal writer position, accepting the position of Marketing Director for the venerable landscape architecture and planning firm Royston, Hanamoto, Alley & Abey, now known simply as RHAA. This experience immersed me in the Request for Proposal (RFP) and Request for Qualifications (RFQ) process, because RHAA at that time was a proposal mill. Between 1994 and 1997, I developed over 150 proposals, statements of qualifications, and expanded letters of interest, often single-handedly doing all of the writing and graphics production for the submittals. RHAA’s primary client groups were the National Parks Service, the California Department of Parks and Recreation, municipal and regional governments, academic institutions, commercial, and corporate clients. Virtually all of these contracts used a two-part system under which competitive firms were short-listed based on the merits of their proposals, and then required to endure an interview process. I short-listed RHAA at a rate of nearly 100 percent and routinely received extraordinary ratings on my submittals. Former Associate Vice Provost for Planning at Stanford University David J. Neuman rated my winning proposal for infrastructure planning at Stanford’s Hopkins Marine Station “one of the finest proposals I have ever received, including proposals submitted for far more important architectural projects…”

My proposal development experience graduated to a new level when I joined the Bechtel Corporation’s Infrastructure group, BINFRA, as a consultant. Where I had been a soloist at RHAA, I became a proposal team member at Bechtel and there got a taste of how big-time proposal operations are run. BINFRA pursued only mega-projects, for which they primarily focused on program management, and our victories there included the $2.5 billion-plus Doha International Airport, the $1.3 billion Seattle Monorail project (partially funded), the Tacoma Narrows bridge and the Portland Light Rail project. Bechtel introduced me to the proposal kickoff and Red Team review processes and got me up close and personal with complex joint venture operations, which added an entirely new layer of understanding of proposal development. Successes with the BINFRA group led to other proposal opportunities with Bechtel’s Mining & Metals division, which included participation in the $7 billion-plus Saudi Arabian Ma’aden Aluminium project, which included a bauxite mine, refinery, smelter, heavy gauge railroad, and sea port.  

I am currently developing proposals - or "deals" as they call them - for Cisco Systems. My role as a "Bid Developer" is primarily project management. A consultant to the Proposal Experts team, I am assigned to account teams responding to RFP from service providers (primarily), often in "emerging markets." We primarily provide network hardware and software solutions (products) for Internet Service Providers, IPTV and telecommunications companies. My role is to organize proposal kickoff meetings, work in close coordination with account managers for the deals, clarify strategies, establish and manage the proposal development timeline (including legal and finance review), and manage the development of the document(s). Cisco uses a "workbook" approach to proposal development and I maintain this document, which is used to identify the "virtual team," assign responsibilities for the technical response, identify and resolve "non-standards" and "futures" (products not currently available to be delivered at a future date, which translates into deferred revenue), track development progress, and perform reporting and close-out duties. I search Cisco source documents for content appropriate to responses to RFP, modifying it as appropriate for each engagement.

DoD Proposals

When I joined Innovative Technical Solutions, Inc. (ITSI) I gained yet another layer of experience, this with proposals for Department of Defense (DoD) contracts. ITSI is a prime military contractor providing environmental engineering and construction services to the U.S. Army Corps of Engineers (USACE), the U.S. Air Force (AFCEE and AFCESA), and the U.S. Navy. DoD contracts are primarily offered as Indefinite Delivery/Indefinite Quantity (ID/IQ) vehicles, and firms compete with firms of similar size (i.e., 8[a], Small Business, Large Business) with the firms selected for contract having further opportunities to compete for individual task orders.

Writing proposals for DoD ID/IQ contracts is a specific and constrained process and doing it effectively requires an intimate understanding of the nuances of the various DoD agencies. Fortunately at ITSI I fell under the tutorship of some highly experienced proposal specialists who helped me navigate the narrow channels of government contracting.

Proposal Kickoff

The proposal kickoff meeting typically sets the tone for the proposal development process and how well it is managed often determines how smoothly the process will work. The main purpose of the meeting is to introduce the proposal

team – one would hope that multi-partner teams would be defined by this crucial stage. The kickoff introduces the key personnel and establishes the Division of Responsibility (DOR) discussed below. The meeting identifies the projects that will be referenced in the proposal as “relevant experience,” and the personnel that will be represented in resumes.

Most importantly, the kickoff meeting is used to set the strategy for the proposal effort. Likely competitors are identified and their relative strengths and weaknesses are discussed. The proposal manager captures the proposal team’s ideas about their own strengths and weaknesses and how best to position them relative to the competition. From this discussion, themes should emerge – points that should be consistently emphasized throughout the proposal, some to convey why your team is most especially qualified for the work, and perhaps to subtly undermine the perceived strengths of competitive firms. Bringing focus to, and managing, this process is one of the most important skills that any proposal manager can possess. Proposal teams rise and fall on this crucible.

Red Team

The Red Team is a formal review process that is tough by design. Proposal experts, primary stakeholders, and technical experts intimate with the thinking of the client agency for which the proposal is being developed review the draft proposal and offer their critiques. These can be tremendously useful, psychologically damaging to the proposal team, or a complete waste of time depending upon how they are managed. Sometimes they are all three things at once.

Great proposal managers have mechanisms for managing Red Team reviews, which are usually built around provision of effective scoring mechanisms for review participants, means for gathering useful information, and methodologies for limiting the extraneous. The bigger and more powerful firms are often the ones that struggle most significantly with the Red Team process because they attract the biggest, most powerful casts of Red Team reviewers. I have seen major players in the engineering/construction industry battle past midnight for days running over the wording of executive summaries, technical approaches, milestone schedules, and the numbers on spreadsheets.

Marketing Small and Large Firms

My experiences developing proposals at Shaw Environmental & Infrastructure and at ITSI brought into focus the difference in approaches that must be taken when marketing 8(a) and Small Business firms versus a giant firm like Bechtel. It has to do with the types of contracts each pursues, and the types of people each has on staff.

Bechtel is among the largest engineering/construction firms in the world and my experience, working at the firm’s San Francisco headquarters, was that it is a company of “superstars.” (I would occasionally ride the elevator up to my office in the morning with former Secretary of State George Schultz, who was one of Bechtel’s directors at the time.) Bechtel hires high profile guys like former astronaut Dr. James “Ox” Van Hoften and NFL Fall of Fame lineman Tom Mack to represent the firm to clients. The war horses you see around the corporate offices tend to be guys with four and more decades of experience, including work on some of the largest engineering projects ever undertaken. Bechtel has made a corporate decision to be a program management firm almost exclusively, and to leave the relatively pedestrian tasks of project management, field engineering, and engineering design to smaller subcontractors. There is an attitude there that engineers are a dime a dozen and inexpensive to boot. The old bulls in the firm hardly need to be marketed, their resumes speak for who they are and what they know. Bechtel tends to throw resumes into proposals by the dozens to show that their resources are more than sufficient to handle the largest projects.

When I went to the smaller firms, which were pursuing ID/IQ contracts, I learned that their challenges in marketing their expertise were significantly different from what I had experienced at Bechtel. Most RFP for DoD contracts only request resumes for four or five “key personnel,” usually a Program Manager who will oversee all task orders under the contract, a Senior Project Manager or two who will run work in the field, a Health and Safety Specialist (usually a CIH) to ensure that work is performed safely, a Quality Control Manager to ensure the quality of the final product, and possibly a Contracts Manager. There may be resumes provided for important technical personnel, but not always. Firm resource issues are often handled in tables providing summary information (numbers and locations of offices, project managers, site superintendents, etc.). On resumes the smaller firms are tasked with showing how their handful of project leaders are qualified to meet the requirements identified in the scope of work (SOW) stated in the RFP. They often do have experience relevant to parts of the SOW, but more often than not marketing smaller firms is all about positioning the experience of key personnel in ways that emphasize why what they have done qualifies them for what they will be expected to do. The idea is to score as many points on the client’s rating sheet as is practically possible. 

In that sense, marketing a smaller firm is far more nuanced than marketing a Bechtel or a URS (another large firm for which I have worked). At ITSI I received excellent training in making these sometimes challenging qualifications statements. I learned to explore each bit of professional experience represented on a resume to emphasize tasks relevant to the RFP SOW. I grew to understand the specifics of field engineering, to view projects from a task level. This is a critical skill, whether developing project past performance information, company profiles, or resumes. You must play from your strengths, emphasizing what you have and deemphasizing what you don’t.

Dissecting the DoD RFP

Dissecting DoD RFP is a special skill in its own right. They are all organized in the same way, as defined under the Federal Acquisition Regulation (FAR), with the biddable scope items enumerated in Section A, a project overview in Section C, and details of the submittal requirements laid out in Section L. Section M provides detail on how the information provided in the proposal will be evaluated, and proposal writers spend a great deal of time analyzing those sections.

Part of that analytical process relates to something I have noticed from the first RFP I ever developed a proposal for, that being that RFP requirements are often not stated very clearly. The biggest cliché in the world is the line “This RFP is really poorly written.”  Someone says that at every proposal kickoff meeting, and it is often true. Organizations like USACE generate a lot of RFP. The tasks usually land on the shoulders of administrative personnel who typically borrow from previously released RFP and retrofit to meet the current need. Since the organization of DoD RFP is standardized, this borrowing makes sense, but frequently magnitudes are mismatched; texts from multi-million dollar RFP are used to put together requirements for $100,000 task order type RFP, and disconnects occur.

DoD groups address these common problems by allowing prospective proposers to pose questions about the RFP process, with answers provided through specified websites. Sometimes these questions surface problems of sufficient gravity that they require the publication of an amendment to the RFP. Whatever the case, it is critical that the proposer watch the solicitation website closely so that submittals can be developed that “answer the mail,” as the cliché goes, i.e., are fully responsive.

DoD RFP are also narrowly scoped to define specific types of work, and analysts must educate themselves to understand these contract vehicles. A sense of history helps, too, as some contract vehicles are follow-on to previous contracts. The Air Force Center for Environmental Excellence (AFCEE) Heavy Engineering Repair and Construction (HERC) contracts, for instance, are a follow-on to AFCEE’s Worldwide Environmental Restoration and Construction (WERC) contracts, the WERC being environmentally focused (e.g., remediation, restoration, abatement, assessment) and the HERC being focused on follow-up heavy construction. Those are both big budget ID/IQ. DoD proposal writers will also deal with smaller contract vehicles like the Multiple Award Task Order Contracts (MATOC) offered through USACE district offices, which usually cap task orders at $100,000. Obviously each of those contract types require entirely different proposal approaches.

Division of Responsibility

Large firms with large proposal teams will use a “Division of Responsibility” (DOR) document that outlines the deliverable sections of a submittal, identifies the lead writer and lead reviewer for each part of the submittal, and identifies a timeline for drafts, review and completion. The DOR also serves as a punch list of required pieces, including tabs and other document infrastructure. Smaller firms tend to be less formal about the process, but I have found the use of the DOR to be indispensable, if only because I prefer the clarity of a central organizing document.

Proposal Cover Letter

Approaches to cover letters for submittals vary widely. Some firms eschew them altogether, and others may as well because they simply use the cover letter as a transmittal sheet to identify the solicitation number for which the proposal is being submitted. These missives tend to be central issues of discussion at professional services marketing seminars, with marketing consultants ripping the use of formulaic, cliché language. Unfortunately, many firms unintentionally use them in a way that demonstrates how extraordinarily prosaic they are.

I personally believe the cover letter is one of the most important pieces of any submittal. It provides an opportunity to say something about why the firm is pursuing the work, introduce the makeup of the team, and create positioning for everything the reviewers will encounter in the formal submittal. The cover letter provides the set-up that proposals usually require, and they usually don’t figure against limited page counts.

 

 

©Rick Alan Rice (RAR), April, 2007

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